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The Silent Story-killer: Writing The Mundane

4/26/2017

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I will always encourage writers to never stop reading. In my experience, it's the single best way to hone your craft. This past week or so, my reading has alerted me to a solution for a problem that has plagued my writing for a long time.

Have you ever started writing a scene that started off so purposeful, and then three paragraphs in your main character is still working on getting dressed and eating breakfast? This awesome story has turned into, well, your morning routine. No offense, but that's probably the last thing people want to read about.

I can't tell you how many times I have fallen into the trap of the mundane. And the results are devastating: readers who don't want to read, and even worse, a writer who loses interest in writing. How can you continue writing when you character is just munching away on dinner and you'd really like to go eat dinner yourself? There's not a more effective way to make a story die than to slowly suffocate it with mundane details.

I'm very aware of this tendency in my own writing. I've talked about it with fellow writing friends and tried various revision techniques, but somehow it always sneaks through. While recently reading a book on vacation though, I slowly found my answer. I realized a big difference between my writing and the author's. Her story had purpose; every paragraph and every chapter accomplished something. There was no teeth brushing, meal eating, or changing clothes. And I wasn't distressed that her characters never seemed to do personal hygiene. I didn't even notice! I was too involved in the actual story.

The only time those types of things showed up were if they were important -- the meal the characters were eating with their family was fraught with tension. Or, the usually tidy and put-together character didn't care about changing their rumpled clothes or brushing their hair. The only time the mundane came up was to give insight into the characters or plot. And by the way it was presented, it could hardly be called mundane anymore.

Knowing what I had to do, I took a long look at my current story. It's very hard to cut off the dead weight because sometimes those scenes and descriptions can be close to your heart. But what are they accomplishing? Going forward, I'm going to make every piece of writing work harder for me. It has to either:
  1. Give character insight or development
  2. Creating setting/feeling
  3. Further the plot

If a scene doesn't accomplish at least one of those things, I need to think seriously about cutting it out. And even if it does accomplish one of those things, I need to ask myself if it can work harder. Example: if a piece of writing is just setting the scene, is there a way I can describe the setting so that it also conveys character insight?

This won't be an easy task. In fact, it can be a very arduous one. But in order to create a crisp story that doesn't lag, it needs to be done.

One word of caution: the flow of the story and feeling it creates does still need to stay intact. You don't want scenes to end up disjointed or have a story world that doesn't feel immersive. But pay attention to those mundane sections that creep up. What are they adding?

Happy revising!


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    Hi, I'm Jessica! I'm on a mission to make my writing better in hopes of becoming a published novelist. It's been a crazy journey so far as I learn the twists and turns of the publishing world, but it's been worth it. Though I'm still learning how to be the best writer I can be, I'm excited to share what I learn with you. Happy writing!

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  • Published Works
    • The Mule Of Mud Hollow - Novel
    • When The Tide Comes In - Short fiction
    • A Walk Around Inis Mor - Travel memoir
    • 8 Superpowers of Highly Sensitive People - Nonfiction
    • Grandma tells a story - Poem
    • 5 Reasons Why HSPs Are Pros At Traveling - Nonfiction
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